Review of Traditional Festival Exercise

Comments on traditional holiday exercises are as follows:

1. In this narrative, the author describes the traditional Spring Festival, and introduces in detail the busyness at home before and after the Spring Festival. The language is simple and natural, which makes people feel more cordial to read. Between the lines, it reveals a fresh breath of life and children's childlike interest.

This is a narrative, and the author describes the grand occasion of the Spring Festival in Chinatown for us. The author describes it in detail: "The dragon dancers toss the dragon up and down and left and right, and the dragon flies up and down as if it were alive", and "A colorful lotus lantern with a pink ribbon is flying in the air", which sets off a lively atmosphere by describing the constant movements of the dragon dancers.

It can be seen that the little author's language is exquisite and impressive. The article adopts the general form of general score and compact structure, and reveals the author's praise for the lively and extraordinary Spring Festival between the lines.

3. Through the case of Bao jiaozi, this article clearly expresses the truth that you can't give up halfway, and makes jiaozi's appearance concrete and vivid by using several figurative sentences. But it might be better if the language is more concise.

This is a narrative. With the help of his father, the author introduced us to the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival and the author's determination to be a patriotic person like Qu Yuan. The language of the article is fluent, so it would be better if you could describe the psychological activities after listening to Dad's introduction.

5. The author describes the customs of the Dragon Boat Festival in detail from the folk songs of the Dragon Boat Festival. The customs described in the article are quite numerous and detailed, but they are only brief statements, which seem a little dull. However, the structure of the article is relatively complete.