Fifth grade essay 650 words: a unique talent contest

Essay Title: A Talent Contest of a Different Kind

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Title of the essay. Words: Elementary School Fifth Grade 650 Words

Word Count: 650 Words Essay

This essay is suitable for: Elementary School Fifth Grade

Essay Source. "Hahahahaha!

"A burst of joyful laughter came from the small auditorium, and guess what our third grade students are doing? Tell you what, we're having a talent contest!

The competition began, I and another host Huang Rong with a smile on his face on the stage, announced the start of the competition, the stage immediately rang a warm applause. First on the stage is three (1) class team member Jiang Cao Ya, she walked on stage with grace, sang "Lhasa bar". Her singing voice was so beautiful, as if she had really come to the bar in Lhasa, drinking strong wine and listening to the beautiful music. The performances went on one after another, there was a melodious guzheng, a lovely textbook play, and a spirited dance ...... Finally it was my turn, and I was a little nervous. I put on my royal robe, holding a folding fan in my hand, with my back toward the audience. When the music started, I turned around, the folding fan opened, and recited "Sending Yuan Er to Envoy Anxi": moist dust on the morning rain of Weicheng, the guest house is green and the willow color is new. I urge you to drink a cup of wine, and leave the Yangguan Pass in the west without an old friend. Next, I memorized the Three Character Classic to the music of Disco Dancing Star: "In the beginning of man, nature is good. Sex is close, the practice is far away ...... Then, I continue with the "fishing boat singing night" music to write up the brush characters, not long, I wrote four brush characters "deep forest and moon" written, I and another host Huang Rong high up the brush characters, said loudly: "I wish our motherland will always be deep in the forest and bright in the moon!

"I hope we can hold more activities like this in Hai Shi Elementary School, so that we can have fun and show our true style!

Master comment: This essay uses the writing technique of flashbacks, allowing the reader to first see the "Talent Competition" to bring happiness to the students. The composition is selected from the "talent contest" in two special shots to carry out a detailed description: one is the first on the field of students, the second is the "I" wonderful performance, the performance of other students used a write method, so that there are detailed description, can make the focus of the composition more prominent. This can make the focus of the composition more prominent, to avoid the composition has the feeling of running water account. The action description in the essay is more delicate: "I put on my royal robe, holding a folding fan in my hand, with my back facing the audience. When the music started, I turned around and opened the folding fan," as if letting the reader see the scene when "I" performed. (Scholastic China Special Teacher: Ms. Luo Danna)2009-7-18 9:23:00