An essay on "awe"?

Before his death, Master Hongyi repeatedly told his disciples to put his body in a niche, and a bowl was placed under every corner of the niche, which was filled with water to prevent ants and insects from being burned innocently when they climbed onto the corpse. After reading the biography of Master Hongyi several times, I am always deeply moved by Master Hongyi's deep sympathy and awe for life.

Schwaetzer, a French thinker, once wrote in the book Fear of Life: When he volunteered to go to Africa to practice medicine, one evening, he saw several hippos swimming side by side with their boats in the river and suddenly realized the loveliness and sacredness of life. As a result, the thought of "fear of life" suddenly appeared in his mind and became the cause he tirelessly advocated and pursued since then.

In fact, only when we have awe of life, will the world show infinite vitality in front of us, and we will always feel the nobility and beauty of life everywhere. Small ants moving on the ground, birds singing on the branches in spring, antelopes running at the foot of snow-capped mountains on the plateau, whales swimming in the sea, etc. , have enriched the life world. We will always get the epiphany and joy of life through experience.

But since the birth of the era of human civilization, human beings have never looked at other life with equal eyes. But these lives actually exist around us. "All things are equal", yes, people often say so, but what have humans done to those creatures like them?

We picked up axes, bows and arrows and began to attack nature. Finally, we built a house in the forest and roasted game on the bonfire. Except for human beings, other creatures are regarded as low-level life by us. We stood up and went to the mountains to see our masterpieces: large forests were destroyed in flames and smoke, countless animals lost their homes, and many biological groups gradually disappeared ... We forgot that human beings are also children of nature, and we came to this day in a difficult struggle.

If one day, those precious species on the earth are completely extinct by human beings, what will we think?

Therefore, whenever I read those stories about life, I always feel the unbearable weight of life in my heart. For example, in the Sahara desert, the female camel jumped into the pool in order to let the dying young camel drink the water that could not reach; In order to let the young antelopes escape, the old antelopes jumped on the cliff one by one, and let the young antelopes take them to the opposite hill as a springboard at the moment when they were about to fall. When the eel is fried in the oil pan, it always arches the middle of the body to protect the fish eggs in the stomach; A female wolf looked at the little wolf who died in the hunter's trap, sobbing and howling in the cold moonlight ... In fact, it is not only human beings who have the sacred glory of life.

Sometimes, we fear life in order to love human beings more. Feng Zikai once advised children not to step on ants with their feet and not to kill ants with fire or water. He thinks that he did this not only out of pity, but also because he was afraid that the child's little cruelty would expand in the future, so that he would fly a plane with bombs to bomb innocent civilians.

Indeed, we are afraid of all life on earth, not only because human beings are compassionate, but also because their fate is human destiny: when they are all killed, human beings are like the last domino, and then fall down.

Fear of life

Zhang, Class 28, Senior High School

Life is precious, it only happens once, leaving the years with a back that never looks back; Life is wonderful, it embodies aura and is endless with unique strength; Life is beautiful, it is full of vitality, exuding infinite hope and vitality. Life is a sacred miracle and reverence for the value of life.

To fear life, we must first cherish and love life and realize its value.

Stephen hawking, a world-famous physicist, was almost completely paralyzed after being diagnosed with motor neuron atrophy at the age of 22. He can't speak and can only communicate with people through a computer that simulates human voice, but he has made extraordinary scientific achievements. His A Brief History of Time is popular all over the world and is considered as the best popular science reading. In the face of misfortune, Hawking didn't give up, didn't complain, at least he still had a life. He chose to cherish and fear life. Physical disability will not prevent him from creating the value of life with awe. Therefore, no matter what difficulties and setbacks we encounter, we can't shake our faith in life.

Fear life, but also respect the lives of others. Even make sacrifices when necessary to save more lives.

Li Jianying, a hero of heaven and earth, failed on the way back from a flight training mission. In the choice of parachuting to save his life and protect people's lives, he gave up the opportunity of parachuting and chose to land without hesitation. As a result, the plane exploded during the forced landing, and the hero's soul returned to the sky. 16 seconds, when the plane couldn't turn, he changed the course with his life, and explained his respect and awe for human life with an eternal and pious gesture. In contrast, some people who make fake drugs and produce "problem food" are born after killing people, ignoring life, not to mention fear! This is a blasphemy and cruelty to life, a moral decline and a social sorrow.

Fear of life, a supreme state, is to respect and care for all life and understand the true meaning of life.

The Qinghai-Tibet Railway runs over mountains and mountains, winding in the snowy plateau. While ensuring traffic, the builders did not forget to leave a special passage for Tibetan antelopes. The fully enclosed train leaves a distance of awe for life. On the contrary, there is no fear, so some people kill animals; There is no fear, so some people chop and chop ... life is equal. Because of awe, life can live in harmony and reflect the wonderful and true meaning of life.

Fear your own life and create unlimited value with limited life; Respect other people's lives, and write praises of life with love and respect; Fear all life that exists, and let all life shine.

Life is more noble and beautiful because of awe.

revere

Awe is a kind of respect attitude towards things in the world. It regulates and guides one's behavior with the lowest moral bottom line, which makes one's mind quiet and satisfied, and at the same time makes the world gradually lose its ugly side.

Today, when we are concerned about material and consumption, we need to keep awe at all times and handle the relationship between man and nature, man and man, and man and society.

If you are always in awe, you must always fear nature.

In the past when social civilization was underdeveloped, we looked at nature with the concept of "harmony between man and nature". This is awe, so we have achieved harmony between man and nature. However, nowadays, when we ignore the laws of nature and constantly demand more from nature and emit more, have we ever thought that this attitude of ignoring nature will make us suffer? Do you still remember the painful lesson that the Sumatra tsunami weakened the protection of nature by cutting down mangroves, resulting in the death of hundreds of thousands of people?

Therefore, when facing nature, we should always keep awe, control our behaviors and desires in production and life, and realize the harmony between man and nature.

Always be in awe and always respect life.

Mother Teresa's love for the poor lies in her respect for life, even if it is so humble. She once took a dying old man back to the hospice. He lay in bed, held the nun's hand tightly and said, I have lived like a dog all my life, and now I live like a person. Thank you! "Respect human life, treat others as equals to your own life, and see everyone's value and dignity, but don't despise or ignore him because of his race, wealth, status and knowledge. Based on the principle of reverence for life, Mother Teresa made herself a "meditator of God" and gained inner peace and satisfaction. She also practiced this principle with her life and awakened the conscience of the whole world with the concept of "love to do small things". This is the highest expression of constant awe.

Therefore, we should always fear every life and care for ourselves and others equally.

Always be in awe, and also be in awe of culture.

Recalling his Sanskrit teacher, Mr. Sikh, Ji Xianlin said that although he was over 80 years old, he still carefully guided his only student and made it his sacred mission to pass on his lifelong knowledge to a foreign student. I think this is the attitude of real scholars: study responsibly and pass it on cautiously. This is in stark contrast to some "scholars" who have no awe of traditional culture and joke about history.

Therefore, we should always be in awe of knowledge and learning, culture and tradition, which is also the life of learning.

No matter to nature, life or knowledge, we should always be in awe, don't indulge ourselves to cross that moral line, and keep our behavior consistent with the minimum moral ethics and human conscience. Otherwise, we not only betrayed ourselves, but also caused chaos and disorder in the world.

People, we should always be in awe, not moved by small good, not moved by small evil, in order to make ourselves harmonious inside and outside and achieve harmony between people!

Score 22+22+9 = 53

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Awe is a flower

There are many flowers in life, but I only like the flower of awe; Although not delicate and charming, it is by no means dry; It is very fragrant, and its fragrance is like sweet spring, which moistens my heart. ...

When there are no waves in the gurgling river, the flowers of awe bloom in silence. The rippling water drops have reached my heart, and my heart is shaking, as if I saw Qu Zi's concern for the country and the people in that faint water wave, as if I saw how much loneliness Qu Zi's silent lament drowned-however, he didn't sigh again, and his Luo Shang disappeared with the rippling water wave at that moment, but I don't know how much fragrance this gentle dance inspired future generations. ...

I fear Qu Zi's noble heart and his great thoughts, just like a flower, which exudes noble fragrance.

When the general breeze blows on the storm pavilion, a flower of awe blooms in sobs. The flying flag of the Yue family is shaking helplessly. As long as Yue Fei pours the poisoned wine of 100,000 troops on him, he will rush into the capital, but is this worthy of his mother's expectations? Is it worthy of "loyalty to the country"? He didn't hesitate, holding up the wine of life with one arm and spilling his loyalty-but he didn't know how many descendants were loyal at this eternal moment. ...

I am in awe of Yue Fei's loyalty, like a flower with the light of loyalty.

When the Rome Square burst into flames, a flower of awe bloomed in the flames. Even though the Pope is laughing and the unyielding Bruno is poised, the voice of truth is still floating: "People in the future will understand me ..." His body turned to ashes, but his soul suddenly rose-but he didn't know that the fire brought thousands of lives in pursuit of truth.

I am in awe of Bruno's persistent pursuit of truth, just like a flower with the fragrance of truth.

When the German Chancellor kneels to the Jewish people, when the China flag is raised for the first time in the square, when China football rushes out of Asia and goes to the world, when white soldiers form a solid defense line, when China ushers in another bumper harvest year ... Isn't the flower of awe blooming at this moment? Isn't it more fragrant?

Awe is a flower, a noble flower, a loyal flower, a truth flower, an equal flower, a United flower ... The fragrance of flowers wafts, enriching my soul and inspiring my life.

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We should fear life.

"The wind can blow away a big piece of paper, but it can't blow away a weak butterfly, because the power of life is unyielding." Every time I read this sentence, I feel a kind of respect. Because of this unyielding strength, I feel the sublimity of life.

We should fear life. Fear of life is the shaping of self-soul and the promotion of self-personality.

I still remember that in a tennis open, a tense and intense game was going on. Suddenly, unfortunately, a bird accidentally broke into the court, was hit by a tennis ball, died and fell on the pitch. This episode stunned everyone present. What is even more unexpected is that the player kneels in front of the dead bird, looking dignified and pious. This kneeling is undoubtedly the most touching one.

In ancient times, everyone knelt down to the emperor; In modern times, we also kneel to our dead relatives. Sometimes, I kneel down and ask others for help ... Many people kneel down, but how many people kneel down for a bird? As the ancients said, people have gold under their knees. People don't kneel to others easily, let alone a bird that is not worth mentioning in his eyes. But he knelt down, which carried the guilt, sadness and deep awe of life of the selected hand. I want to say that although I am kneeling, I am much taller than countless people who stand without respect for life and fear.

I still remember that the bus driver had a heart attack while driving. He did three things: first, he drove the car to the road, pulled the brakes with his last strength and stopped the car; The second is to press the button of the door and find the driving door; The third is to extinguish the engine. After that, he lay on the steering wheel and stopped breathing. When death suddenly came, he didn't panic and was in pain. All he can think about is the passengers in the car. This seemingly incredible behavior bears a strong sense of responsibility of a bus driver and a real person's lofty reverence for life. It is said that death is the touchstone, and the bus driver's behavior shows his incomparable personality charm. He is undoubtedly great. Although he is dead, he lives in people's hearts.

Albert. Schwaetzer once said: "Good is to preserve and promote life, and evil is to hinder and destroy life." Whether tennis players kneel or bus drivers do three things before they die, they all reflect one of the greatest emotions of human beings: fear of life. This life, whether animal or human, whether small or great, deserves our awe. And their awe of life is not worthy of our respect-"real people"?

Fear life, let every life fear you! (842 words)

Forever awe

"Awe", a familiar and unfamiliar word. What is familiar is that people often say to be in awe, but what is strange is that not many people can put it into practice and persevere. Until now, people have discovered how urgent and important it is to always maintain awe.

Only by always having awe of nature can we understand eternity.

Since ancient times, countless scholars at home and abroad, including artists, have written their highest respect for nature with their own pens. They rooted life in nature and pursued the eternal combination of soul art and nature. Van Gogh, a painter who dived into nature, devoted his life to painting in nature. He likes to paint in the wild, and a painting is a whole day. He constantly observed the flowers, fish, insects and rice fields around him, and was gradually impressed by the power of nature. Thick oil paints are his awe of nature, and brilliant sunflowers are his love for nature. He died young, and most of his life was carved in the orbit of nature. His paintings were regarded as "eternal" by the world.

But ignorant human beings are still trampling on the dignity of nature and have not seen the angry face of nature. Cutting down trees, filling the sea, killing animals ... human pride is above nature, without respect and fear. As a result, natural disasters continue to occur, the sea level rises, and the ozone layer becomes empty ... The clock at the end point is suddenly set forward by three minutes. Only in this way can people understand that the cornerstone of eternity lies in the constant fear of nature.

Only by always maintaining awe of life will we know how to cherish it.

Wang Yongqing, the legendary "Formosa Plastics King" who just passed away, has a famous saying: Every dollar saved means every dollar earned. This sentence is regarded as a "classic" by many business people at home and abroad, not only because it can make people rich, but more importantly, it understands the essence of life-cherish. More than 90 years of life experience, from a rice shop apprentice to a world-renowned businessman; From poverty and embarrassment to wealth, Wang Yongqing has always been frugal in life. For decades, he insisted that children keep accounts and use money, even if they buy a toothpaste, they should record it. But for charity, he is not stingy, donating money to build hospitals and hope primary schools. People asked him why, but he simply said, "Wealth is a gift from heaven, and it doesn't really belong to us." He knew that life was hard-won, so Wang Yongqing was in awe of life all his life. This let him see everything worth cherishing and let him know how to cherish.

Only by always being in awe of history can we win respect.

Qu Tongzu is a famous historian and jurist in China, and plays an important role in the field of history and law in China. He only published four books in his life, but these books have had an important impact at home and abroad. In his later years, people hoped that he could approve the reprint of his works, but he declined politely on the grounds that two of them did not accurately reproduce history. This shows that an old man in his nineties has always been in awe of history. This makes Qu Tongzu's old man gain a greater reputation in the field of history.

Awe is actually in people's hearts. It's not surprising, it's just covered up. Only by constant awe can we become familiar and internalize into the essence of life.

Score17+18+6 = 41.

Comment on this article's clear structure, and the "Chang" is well reflected in the text, which is commendable.

But the problems in this paper are also obvious. The biggest problem is that the argument is inaccurate and the case is blunt, regardless of whether the case is useful or not, so it seems far-fetched like Van Gogh and Wang Yongqing. In addition, at the back of the article, it is better to have two proper explanations from viewpoints to examples: "Always fear life and know how to cherish it" and "Always fear history and win respect", so that it is easier to explain viewpoints more deeply, and it is also possible to make an appropriate transition between viewpoints and examples, and examples can play a more illustrative role. There are also some languages that are not scrutinized enough and the argumentative language is not accurate enough.

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Forever awe

"Awe", a familiar and unfamiliar word. What is familiar is that people often say to be in awe, but what is strange is that not many people can put it into practice and persevere. Until now, people have discovered how urgent and important it is to always maintain awe.

Always be in awe of the pursuit of ideals in order to achieve eternity. ("Forever fearing nature" means always fearing nature, not trampling on nature, and not treating nature casually. Van Gogh's example does not highlight this point, but mainly expresses Van Gogh's love for art, at most, it only shows Van Gogh's awe of art, his own ideal and the most pursued awe. Therefore, it is better to change "always fear nature" into "always fear and pursue ideals to achieve eternity." )

Since ancient times, countless scholars at home and abroad, including artists, have written their highest respect for nature with their own pens. They rooted life in nature and pursued the eternal combination of soul art and nature. Van Gogh, a painter who dived into nature, devoted his life to painting in nature. He likes to paint in the wild, and a painting is a whole day. He constantly observed the flowers, fish, insects and rice fields around him, and was gradually impressed by the power of nature. Thick oil paints are his awe of nature, and brilliant sunflowers are his love for nature. He died young, and most of his life was carved in the orbit of nature. His paintings were regarded as "eternal" by the world.

But now many so-called "artists" can't find the awe that Van Gogh pursued in art. Those people keep saying that the art they pursue is a lofty cause, but they are actually too lazy to work hard, and some just regard art as a stepping stone to pursue fame and fortune. Some even spoil art at will under the guise of "pursuing art". Call a few children, cover them with ink, and scroll on the drawing paper at will. This is art.. Hanging a few bricks on your body and parading around the campus like a madman is a performance art? Even if these can be a sensation, they are more used as jokes. How can they achieve eternity? This paragraph contrasts with the previous one. Since "always revere nature" has been changed to "always revere the ideal and realize eternity", this paragraph must be handled well in order to connect closely. )

The constant awe of traditional virtues makes people's spirit more lofty. ("Never fear life" means always fear life and take life seriously, not dance academy. Wang Yongqing's example did not highlight this point, but mainly expressed Wang Yongqing's "frugal life", "enthusiastic charity" and "attitude towards wealth". Therefore, it is better to change "always fearing life" into "always fearing traditional virtues to make people's spirit more lofty" and so on. )

Wang Yongqing, the legendary "Formosa Plastics King" who just died, has a famous saying: If you save one dollar, you will earn one more. This sentence is regarded as a "classic" by many business people at home and abroad, not only because it can make people rich, but more importantly, it understands the essence of life-cherish. More than 90 years of life experience, from a rice shop apprentice to a world-renowned businessman; From poverty and embarrassment to wealth, Wang Yongqing has always been frugal in life. For decades, he insisted that children keep accounts and use money, even if they buy a toothpaste, they should record it. But for charity, he is not stingy, donating money to build hospitals and hope primary schools. People asked him why, but he simply said, "Wealth is a gift from heaven, and it doesn't really belong to us." He knew that life was hard-won, so Wang Yongqing was in awe of life all his life. This let him see everything worth cherishing and let him know how to cherish.

Only by always being in awe of history can we win respect.

Qu Tongzu is a famous historian and jurist in China, and plays an important role in the field of history and law in China. He only published four books in his life, but these books have had an important impact at home and abroad. In his later years, people hoped that he could approve the reprint of his works, but he declined politely on the grounds that two of them did not accurately reproduce history. This shows that an old man in his nineties has always been in awe of history. This makes Qu Tongzu's old man gain a greater reputation in the field of history.

Awe is actually in people's hearts. It's not surprising, it's just covered up. Only by constant awe can we become familiar and internalize into the essence of life.

Score 20+20+7=47

Comments are mainly aimed at the obvious problems such as inaccurate arguments in the text and blunt application of examples, and are revised from the perspective of accurately selecting factual arguments. You can also strengthen the intensity of local modifications such as analysis and reasoning, because it is not the focus of this upgrade, so that the focus of training and evaluation is prominent and students are more impressed.