Write a composition with emptiness.

material 1: geese leave their voices, while people leave their names. Footprints will be left everywhere in life: under the bridge on the road, in the streets and lanes … footprints may not be erased, but the road has changed, the bridge has collapsed, the street has disappeared, and the lane has changed … can we still pick up the footprints of the past? Many things have left their footprints as time goes by. What can you think of? Please write a composition on the topic of "Footprints", which can tell stories, expand your imagination and express your feelings. Material 2 affection is intangible, and no one can say what it looks like; Affection is free, and no one will make you pay money for it; Affection is priceless. Nothing can match its price. Affection is selfless. Nothing can sacrifice yourself more than it ... You must have your own unique feelings about affection. Please write a composition on the topic of "feeling family". The requirements of the two materials are the same: ① self-determination; 2 the topic is self-made; 3 style selection; (4) not less than 8 words. Analyze "topics". Footprints are visible and tangible, that is, they are real things; As verbs, the meanings of "feeling affection" and "feeling" lie in thinking or deep in the heart, which cannot be seen and touched, and "affection" is invisible, and exists in the carrier of people's thoughts and feelings. When students are faced with writing topics with specific nouns as the topic, their thinking is often confined to these nouns themselves, and they are not good at association and imagination, or they are not good at divergent thinking in many aspects, so it is difficult to connect the materials collected from real life with the writing topic, and they cannot find the starting point for writing, resulting in a narrow writing space. To this end, we can use the method of "avoiding reality and making it virtual". Specifically, we can use the past scenery, future scenery and heart scenery to reflect the real scene in front of us; The writer can express the real person by mixing synthetic, historical or virtual characters; Notes can reflect the true feelings and facts with the help of things in memory, assumptions and even dreams; Writing theory can be extended with the help of concrete images, talking about history, culture, life, society and so on. Thus, "footprint" can be associated with the road (virtual) at the foot by the real footprint (real), the history (virtual) of growth by the road at the foot, and the footprint (virtual) of life by the growth process. Its connotation is rich and profound, its artistry is revealed, and its philosophy is also excavated. Such ideas, ideas and writing methods can be implemented. For example, the article "Culture, Following the Footprints of Autumn": Culture, singing "lifting myself to look, I found that it was moonlight, sinking back again, I thought suddenly of home" in the footsteps of autumn, while Li Bai is following the footsteps of autumn, looking for the way home; Spit a sentence, "Leave the residual lotus to listen to the rain", and Li Yishan follows the footprints of autumn and disappears into the confused fog; Whispering a sentence, "Stealing a pear core is white, borrowing a plum blossom soul", Lin Daiyu followed the footsteps of autumn and buried the romantic life with a pure land. Autumn, sentimental autumn, its footprints are all over this magical land. With the wheel of history, it has been in Kyushu, China for more than two thousand years. How many literati indulge in the footprints of autumn. Its footprints passed through the fields, and Xin Qiji touched its golden color with "the rich year is said in the fragrance of rice flowers"; Its footprints remain on the frost leaves, leading Du Mu to drive to the "depths of white clouds"; Its footprints were left in the moon palace, which provoked Dongpo to "ask the wine to the sky"; Its footprints remain in the mountains, teaching Tao Qian to "gather chrysanthemums under the hedge" ... more than poetry! When the footprints in autumn 1948 were left in Yuyao, Yu Qiuyu, a figure who influenced the contemporary literary world, was born. The footprints of autumn, accompanied by the continuous autumn rain, have gone through the "cultural journey", passed the "notes of mountain residence", looked at the "long river of frost and coldness" and said "a sigh for a thousand years", ending in "lend me a lifetime". Mr. Yu Qiuyu left the footprints of autumn in the north and south of the river with his pen tip of Boya, which made autumn occupy sufficient weight in China culture and exotic culture! Autumn gave Yu Qiuyu a lifetime, and Yu Qiuyu gave his life to Chinese culture. Following the footsteps of autumn, he took the wounds of the next generation, the tears of the ruins, the dreams of Qu Yuan, the poems of Li Bai, the mountains of Kunlun and the waves of the Yellow River, and he became the nirvana phoenix, flying proudly in the autumn of culture. The shadow of autumn can also be found in the traditional folk culture of China. When the footprints of autumn remain in August, a song "The Moon of the Fifteenth" is sung endlessly, echoing in the barracks at the ends of the earth of the motherland; When the footprints of autumn remain in August, a song "Eight Laurel Flowers" sings the deep affection of soldiers and civilians and remains in the years of burning passion; When the footprints of autumn remain in August, plates of attractive moon cakes are placed on the dining table of every household, and a bite is crispy and delicious, sweet in the mouth and beautiful in the heart; When the footprints of autumn stay in August, the fairy in the Moon Palace also lights a lamp for homesick people. This lamp is called "Mid-Autumn Festival" ... Autumn flowers can pass away, but the footprints of autumn once really existed, and the autumn moon can change, but the footprints of autumn have become eternal. A nation's culture, relying on autumn, will certainly be rich and heavy, passed down from generation to generation. Culture, following the footsteps of autumn, lasts for a long time ... The author quickly positioned the material on "culture" when he saw the "footprints", which made him "avoid reality and be empty". Taking the word "autumn" as a clue, he strung up the cultures across ancient and modern times and across China and the West, which was ingenious and made the article magnificent. This is really a clever idea. This composition is rich in content, which is widely read by practitioners. Masterpieces (which is the "real" theme in this article) are readily available, and there will be no empty discussion and summary introduction, and it will not give readers the feeling of saying nothing and saying little. However, the bottom of the pen is fragrant, the article is profound and rich in cultural atmosphere. Of course, this article has a deep language foundation and literary talent, such as proper quotation (reality), richness and elegance (emptiness); Multi-purpose parallelism, magnificent (virtual). The "emptiness" makes the image of "footprints" fly through the ages and cross China and the West. The course of "culture" has both specific history and region and abstract ideological recognition in readers' minds, thus making readers gain a clear understanding. The artistry produced by its "literary style" and "language style" cannot help but make readers sigh and shock: it is a masterpiece. The topic of "feeling family" covers a wide range. If you directly express your feelings or opinions on this concept, it will inevitably lead to superficial and vague articles. Therefore, the idea can be broad, large and small, and abstract into concrete methods, that is, the content can be specific to the love of mother and child, father and son, brothers and sisters, grandparents and grandchildren. Can also be refined, such as the performance of fatherly love, you can choose a side and an angle about fatherly love, start with a typical case, and write your own unique feelings, which is "avoiding emptiness and being real". In a word, it is the key to write this topic from a specific and small angle. How to turn it into reality? Looking for details from life and searching for typical details from one's own experience, but we should avoid sameness, otherwise we will lose our individuality and become mediocre. In fact, there are thousands of people, different relatives, and different ways to express their affection. Only by expressing your inner world with your own pen can you break through mediocrity and make your composition shine brilliantly. For example, I want to hold your hand: I want to hold your hand. In my impression, your hand is big and my hand is small. Your hand can always easily wrap my hand or cover my whole face. Although I tried to break free, I never succeeded. In my impression, your hands are amazing, while mine are clumsy. Your hand can always conjure up what I want, and you can play such wonderful music on my little electronic piano. Although I have tried many times in private, I can't play your melody. When you held my hand, I still remember that you held my hand and sang "Little White Poplar" and "Wine on September 9". I sang so loudly that night, I know, it was because you were by my side, because you held my hand. I still remember when you held my hand to fly a kite. We ran and laughed wantonly, watching the kite fly higher and higher, but I greedily refused to leave your palm and your arms. When you hold my hand, there is no fear and cold in my world; When you hold my hand, I will always have a clear sky; When you hold my hand, I am really a kite. Even if I fly, the thread is still in your hand. I want to hold your hand countless times. I want you to hold my hand, give me warmth, give me courage, give me love, and tell me that you are around. Countless times, you have held my hand, giving me warmth, courage and love. But that time, when I should hold your hand, I didn't. You were lying in a hospital bed with a respirator. I saw your painful expression and heard your shortness of breath. I whisper to you in your ear, I know you want to open your eyes, I know you want to hold my hand. I really want to hold your hand, but I don't know why, but I didn't ... You are fighting death, but I didn't hold your hand and give me courage; Your body temperature gradually dissipated, but I didn't hold your hand to give you warmth; You breathe hard and want to fight for a miracle, but I didn't hold your hand and give you love information … I really want to hold your hand and make you smile and try to pull it back; I really want to hold your hand and let my body temperature inject into your palm; I really want to hold your hand and let me repay your kindness all my life; I really want to hold your hand and say to you: I can't participate in the first half of your life, and I will accompany you to the end for the second half of your life ... Write about my father's "hand", which is broad and magical. When I hold my hand, I convey my father's love, but wordless is worth a thousand words of sincere care. I wrote a few "points" (small things) in my life to the learner, and then I tried to write "" The article cuts into the topic from a small angle, making the affection between father and daughter more specific and leaving an unforgettable impression. Father's "hand" is an object line (reality) running through the whole paper, and its connotation conveys a kind of affection (emptiness), which is excavated from the details connected by "reality". It can be seen that the author's deep feelings and whimsy are mixed in his writing, which must be extracted from the real people, things and things, and conveyed to readers is beautiful and true, which is inseparable from handling the relationship between reality and reality in his works. The author suggests that we students should practice small pieces of essays at ordinary times and inject the writing idea of "seeing each other in reality and reality", which will be beneficial. One student drew lessons from this method and wrote the following paragraph: He quickly opened the curtain, then opened the window, and took a deep breath in the face of the rising sun: "How nice, the sun rises from my window every day." On the surface, such a short piece of text is actually written in vain. What did it write in vain? It is the author who is full of confidence and hope in life (this is only implied in the article, but not straightforward). With such content, the article will definitely get a high score in the development level. The composition should be "meaningful in words" and "expressive in words". "Things" are real; "Tao" is also empty. Students are expected to understand the concepts of emptiness and reality and understand the relationship between them, and the stream of writing will never be exhausted.