Excerpt from the perfect composition of the college entrance examination

In study, work and even life, everyone is familiar with composition. Composition is a narrative way in which people express the relevant knowledge, experience and thoughts stored in memory in written form. Then the question comes, how to write an excellent composition? The following are eight excerpts from the model essay of the perfect score of the college entrance examination that I brought to you for your reference!

Excerpt from the model essay of the college entrance examination 1

In the twilight, the water splashed, and the night floated from the gurgling water, wandering on the winding path. The faint jade plate danced and charmed, and pieces of boats were screened out from the cracks in the trees, dancing with the wind and standing alone. The returning birds passed softly in the starry sky at their fingertips, a remnant of lotus, condensing the shallow moonlight.

The coolness is getting deeper and deeper, the dark moon is hanging obliquely, with a quiet breath, singing softly and walking wildly. Suddenly, the canoe has passed, and layers of moonlight are spread on the water, and the sound is whistling in the depths of the unknown jungle, revealing an unattainable vastness. Who is sentimental about this bright and quiet moonlit night?

If there is a delicate fragrance floating to the bow of the boat, the wine is served against the wind, like sake at the setting of the moon, and the drunk looks back and wakes up to smell it-from the heart.

The ancient trees on both sides of the strait whisper in the wind, saying endlessly, "The flowing water is gone in spring, and the world is gone." The talk of "don't be weak in water" can only be understood by the broken lotus leaf. When the wind blows, the shadows of the trees sway and fall brightly, like ripples on the river of a mirror, spreading far away, as if looking for a distant home. The mottled shadows of trees overlap like swords and swords, just like watching running water.

A river is the tears of Qu Zi wearing Eupatorium adenophorum, the loyal soul of Yue family who died in the storm, the stormy night and Wu's unfinished business. Think about it, I don't know when it started and when it ended, but light waves are still ...

I can't help chanting, "I don't know if I will recognize my family in autumn, because I'm looking forward to it tonight." Wandering, like pieces of dead leaves leaving the wood, drifting with the current, letting the wind and rain fall, or the sky is high and the clouds are light, and it has flown to thousands of feet in a blink of an eye. Looking at the unknown in the distance, the pace is getting heavier and heavier, and finally it's time to go back. But the running water is gone, and a fallen leaf changes the sea. Is that broken lotus leaf also for the root? Rooting should be a distant trace, which requires patience, time washing and a sincere heart. The result of root-seeking is naturally shocking, but what is important is its course, which is the yearning and pursuit of ancestors. Now, the moon at night is dim but charming.

I don't know how many broken-hearted guests this river has sent away, and the moon has destroyed a few tears of love. If lotus leaves have feelings, how can they bear to be scattered? It is precisely because of the moonlit night and deep-rooted acacia that people's old age is ruined, and the psychic leaves should also feel the call from afar. She calls back what she calls a lonely soul, which has been sighing for thousands of years.

Listening to the moonlight pouring down on the surface, it broke the quiet night sky, the river sparkling with microwaves, and the lotus leaves, leaving only sake and still drifting away. ...

Excerpt from the full score of the college entrance examination composition model essay II

In the Spring Festival Evening of the Year of the Pig, I heard an old tune that I had never heard before-the yellow land, black skin, gongs and drums blaring for 800 miles! I want to sum up its shocking power in one word-grounding gas! The "old tune" is not a high-pitched Chun Xue, nor is it suitable for shallow singing. It's simple. In the turbulent wind and sand in the northwest, Chun Xue can't take root, and shallow songs can't spread very far. What it cries is the cry of the grass roots at the bottom, reflecting the original ecological hardships of people's development.

The "old tune" has tied so much and carried so much-commonly known as folk custom, elegant as culture! It has a shocking power, because of its truth, its true color, its warmth, and because it is deeply rooted in the persistence of this hot land-it is glorious and they are glorious; It insults, they insult; It prospers and they prosper; Failed! They failed!

Chen once got mad on a TV program. Dozens of rural children in Jishan, Shanxi Province performed a high-platform flower drum, and the audience applauded, but they were degraded to nothing by several judges. Chen thundered: You know nothing about traditional culture, and you directly denied this program. You may have read many books and have a high level of knowledge, but you know little about China's traditional culture and farming civilization, so you can't understand it ... The shock really doesn't lie in how high your education level is or how wide your knowledge is, but in whether you can give up that kind of posturing and feel a heartfelt impulse and piety with a pure heart.

The inheritors of old tunes, Shaanxi tunes and ancient paintings are all so touching and pious in their bones. It's just that we misunderstood this piety and even called it "ignorance" contemptuously. So we saw a tearful scene-Li Fang, the head of the voluntary propaganda party, appeared on a live broadcast platform and begged the manager of the national cinema in an extreme way to increase the number of times for "Hundred Birds in the Phoenix"! Is "A Hundred Birds at the Phoenix" just a suona? Wrong, it sticks to its precious cultural consciousness and determination in the face of the eight styles of eastern and western culture; It expresses the understanding and inheritance of China's excellent traditional culture, as well as the meticulous care for ordinary people in reality ... The land of China is silent, with mountains and rivers, and its passion is only for those who were born in Sri Lanka, grew up in Sri Lanka, and died in Sri Lanka, and our culture is wrapped in this torrent. For thousands of years, all rivers run into the sea, surrounded by ancient and modern times! Why do I often cry? Because I love this land deeply. I hope that the traditional art of "old tune" can come into people's field of vision more and the old tune will become popular!

Excerpt from 3 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

I am a bookmark, a magical bookmark. Carved from bamboo, it also reveals the unique fragrance of bamboo restoration. Perhaps because I have been immersed in ink for too long, people who hold me in their hands will always meditate involuntarily and entrust their body and mind to books. When I first came to this world, I was put into an Atlas of the Ocean before I took off my prickly body. I don't know anything, but I vaguely feel the heat coming from my hand. Evolution, sinking, hesitation, family spring and autumn ... gradually, the burr on my body was erased, and I saw the sky full of smoke more and more clearly, and saw those eyes burning with hope.

In an era, the image of a nation guarding the Millennium civilization in humiliation was printed on me. As time goes by, the breeze blows away the bonfire, and the air gradually overflows with a breath of recovery like early spring. I'm stuck with some new friends again The warm local flavor of Border Town; Stubbornness in the ordinary world; The elegance and loneliness of bloom and Shanghai. Wang Xiaobo, Wang Huo, Bi Feiyu, Beidao ... These names filled another memory with the unique unrestrained and restrained, passion and meditation of this era. After the mess was swept away, the remaining strength, wrapped in youth and vitality, dyed people's hearts red. In the morning light, I would like to be a bridge, drawing a comfortable and quiet between words and mind. The once foggy and secluded sky is slowly illuminated by lights; The once fresh and refreshing air slowly raised dust; The once quiet and peaceful world is slowly filled with noise, leaving no gap.

Time flies, I can't catch people's hearts anymore, and I can't see people's pupils anymore. The pages are getting whiter, softer and smoother. I struggle not to close my eyes, but I can't stand the darkness outside-I seldom see the sun. I have been trapped in a magazine for a long time, and I can only see people's eyes through the cracks, wandering on the dazzling screen. Hand, tightly holding the cold mobile phone. They are getting more and more lonely, huddled in the dark corner of their hearts, shivering. After waiting for a long time and peeking for a long time, I finally understood people's hearts. They lost their memories in the years and got lost in the darkness of ignorance. They argue that they can read the words in the mobile phone, but they don't understand that I have more temperature and memory than them. There is more family and country outside the affair, more words of kindness outside the infatuation, and more blood outside the drunkenness. It is precisely because of their lack of understanding of the suffering and sorrow of this time-honored civilization that they feel disappointed and confused. ...

I am a candidate, an ordinary candidate. Bookmarks tell me its extraordinary experience, and I am eager to record and spread a humanistic book. I think this is my mission and glory in this era.

Excerpt from 4 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

It is raining outside the window. From a distance, the gray sky is covered with a layer of light smoke. On the table, there are several messy books, and a ballpoint pen in the right hand is spinning, accompanied by a lonely figure. Night, loneliness like this, lights, loneliness like me.

Day by day, this lonely lamp has lived in a series of shadows for many years. Although I am used to this kind of life, the dream I pursue is still beyond the distant horizon, just like the sun that Kuafu is looking for. When the past is slowly erased by the dust of the years, when youth is only consumed in boredom and emptiness, I find that "adult education" is not my ultimate goal. The canoe raises a leaf, crosses Chung Shan Man, rides a horse and gallops freely, providing peace and coolness for my soul, so that it can rest in peace. In the past, I may have paid too much attention to temporary success or failure, which led to no progress in my studies. Now that the college entrance examination is approaching, I often open my heart quietly on rainy nights. ...

In spring, everything begins to shine in the bright sunshine, and the mind is clearer and ethereal. I suddenly realized that life needs to experience anxiety, restlessness and confusion in order to move towards peace and return to peace. In summer, the anxiety of the hot sun will inevitably hurt the children in spring, but the kind God does not seem to abandon these creatures, but brings a drizzle, telling them that the value of life lies in dedication. In autumn, the northwest wind blows the lonely earth, and passers-by don't look back. The harvested rice fields silently smell of earth. On the solstice of winter, everything is quiet, only years are collecting seeds for the coming year and looking forward to it.

When you realize life, the meaning of life actually lies in the process, not the result, because all the results in life are the same.

In this world, there are many things that we can't give up, such as money, power, status and generous treatment, as well as a comfortable life, but God is stingy, and beautiful things will not be completely occupied by one person, just like Venus left a beautiful regret. You can't have it both ways, so the wise man in life knows that "the two evils are the least, and the two benefits are the most important." An unfortunate fox was trapped in a trap. Without hesitation, he bit off his calf and ran for his life. In fact, many times we will not give up the calf of life, and even some attachment, desire and vanity are reluctant. Choosing to give up requires not only courage, but also a completely detached life realm. Don't think about poor academic performance, pessimistic prospects, pursuit of enjoyment, and return to fame and fortune. We must give up one of them!

People want too many things in their life, but when they can't get them, we should learn to give them up. This is not only a choice of life, but also a maturity and wisdom of life.

Excerpt from 5 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

"The world is a big dream, how cool is life? At night, the wind leaves are ringing in the gallery. Look at the eyebrows and sideburns.

The wine base is often worried about fewer customers, and the moon is cloudy. Who is alone with * * * on Mid-Autumn Festival? Looking at the north sadly. "

Pour a glass of sake and drink two lines of turbid tears.

Mid-Autumn Festival full moon, full moon. Under the moon, alone. The solitary light shakes under the pavilion, and the figure is the narrowest. No one drinks from a cup, only the moon opens its heart to you. Can your beautiful dreams evoke echoes thousands of miles away? Staring too long, the shadow of the moon is looming, is it moved by the tears of the moon, or covered by clouds in your heart? Life outside prison is free, but it keeps your loyalty away from the holy city. When we reunite, we can only reunite the sadness of a lifetime. Things are unpredictable and dreamlike. These hands, depicting the grand blueprint of the Song Dynasty, trembled even at the moment when they raised their glasses. The wind messed up the clouds and dried your tears. Fallen leaves are the rain in late autumn, which can't wash away your worldly affairs and take away your frustrated injuries. You haven't touched the cold food on the table, but in the glass, your white hair and melancholy eyes are reflected between your temples. You are afraid to see him, an old and decadent sculpture. How can you accommodate your heart full of blood and determination to serve your country?

Ruthless leaves are falling, but you get up when you are frustrated. A misty rain will last your whole life, and the secular storm will not break your strong patriotic heart. You can laugh at life when you are wronged! Ambition determines your unyielding character. You can be confused and disappointed for a while, but there will always be hope in your heart. You are the bright moon in the sky, shining in the Song Dynasty. As long as the passing clouds can cover your light forever, the peace of the people in the Song Dynasty will be guided by your light. Autumn is not only a bleak season, but also a harvest season. You, Su Shi, have gained an important sublimation of life.

You get up, gulp down the wine in the cup, fill it up and face the bright moon. You swallow it again, fill it again, and then look around. Those friends who are with you but not here, drink again, and the wind will get stronger. The trees in the yard shook their heads desperately and welcomed the hero back with applause.

There is only one cup left in a pot of wine, and you don't drink it either. You face the silent night sky in the north, spill this glass of wine into the sky, and then you break the glass and scream at the darkness. Walking in the darkness of the world with a firm and proud back. Rain or shine, you walk calmly and sow the seeds of hope.

The night is quiet again, the wind has stopped, the clouds have passed, and a bright moon is smiling sweetly in the rose green of Wan Li's clear sky. Mid-Autumn Festival full moon, full moon. Under the moon, people are here.

Excerpt from 6 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

In the universal values, all exchanges are equivalent, and those who pay the most deserve the best return, but the reality is often the opposite. Because personal selfishness is wanton in the world, personal interests are arrogant in the world, and only the conscience of the world walks alone.

There is a short story: the little girl exchanged all her sweets for all the stones of the little boy, but the little boy secretly hid the biggest and most beautiful stones and gave the rest to the little girl. That night, the little girl slept soundly, but the little boy couldn't sleep all night, wondering if the little girl also hid the best candy. Children are the most innocent, and the word "conscience" is probably too heavy for them. The little girl's sincerity and kindness make her little world simple and happy, while the little boy's lies make him unable to escape his inner suffering and pain, which is caused by his conscience. I think I prefer to believe that this story is not over. Its real ending should be that the little boy found the little girl early the next morning, gave her all his hidden stones and sincerely apologized to her. With this ending, human nature is complete. If we don't add it, what we see is only broken human nature. After all, evil or regret is only a corner of the world, and it is difficult to cover everything.

But in this materialistic era, this small corner may be infinitely magnified. The world is afraid of being the next direct or indirect victim. After all, life does not come from Andersen, and no one is interested in adding a happy ending to every evil. Many evils are ultimately conscience, and questioning conscience is the best means to complete self-salvation in today's society. Wang Shujin, the flower-destroying maniac, has been brought to justice. Escaped for more than ten years, fidgeting and unable to sleep. In the subsequent trial, he insisted on pleading guilty. It can be seen that in many cases, the role of conscience is even greater than the law, and no one can escape the questioning of conscience. Poisons such as "poisonous milk powder" and "poisonous bean sprouts" that were once "very popular" will one day disappear in the rivers and lakes, and those who betray their conscience will be endlessly condemned. Social evils are at the wrong level. There is sin and blood, there is sympathy and blood and tears, and there are endless Pandora's boxes waiting to be opened or closed forever. It seems difficult for us to drive away the darkness by ourselves, but our conscience is like a torch, which can be projected into the light of the sun from generation to generation. The world is more like Kafka's imagination than a fantasy. We need conscience, and the questioning of conscience has great power. Conscience comes from the softest place in the heart and is an indispensable part of human nature, and the genius of the creator lies in the integrity of everyone's human nature.

No one can completely get rid of conscience. When stepping on a wooden bridge leading to perdition, conscience will certainly be the most powerful reins, which will enable him to pull back from the edge of the cliff. "This is the best time, this is the worst time." In this era predicted by Dickens, we should be grateful to have a conscience to walk with us in the complicated world.

Excerpt from 7 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

Education is the embodiment and carrier of personal quality. Education gives people kindness and friendliness. Education is reflected in daily life, with a smile and a thank you. Sometimes it is the thickness of a piece of paper, not the width of a step. Little by little, gestures are the best interpretation of education.

Education casts perfect quality. When your friend is happy to lend you an umbrella when the sky is clear in Wan Li in the morning, he disappears without a trace when the rainstorm comes suddenly. Don't blame him or resent him, because he just doesn't want two people to share an umbrella, not to say that he is uneducated and alienated from you. This tells you that you should learn to tolerate everything in the future. If you forgive others, you forgive yourself and give yourself a good mood. Education makes you perfect.

Education is sometimes just the thickness of a piece of paper. When you walk casually on the road, go to school and go to work, a thin piece of paper on the road is out of proportion to the beautiful environment around you. Will you slow down, bend down humbly and open your white hands to get that paper? At this time, the degree is really the thickness of a piece of paper, which is a few steps away.

Education is a calm and natural state of mind. When I was a child, I liked fishing very much. I was infected by my neighbor, Uncle Wang. Rain or shine, as long as we are free, we will meet on the S-shaped river, and my floating on the water will not move. So I often change places. And uncle Wang just sits quietly in one place, in no hurry, often carrying a basket full of home, and I seem to be just a few. I asked if there was a coup, "You can't sit still!" This sentence has benefited me so far. Indeed, peace requires a stable attitude, and education means that you can have a calm attitude no matter where you are, which is also an education.

Indeed, every bit of life, every smile, reflects personal education. Unintentionally hurting others, a gentle "sorry" and "please forgive" can often be well understood. Bend down and pick up a piece of paper to help the blind people passing by the intersection ... this gesture reflects your talent.

With your tolerance, others will feel small; With your help, others will gain a strength; Your generosity will make others feel warm. Get the harvest, but not proud; Don't lose heart in the face of setbacks. Poor and unyielding, mighty and unyielding. These are all the upbringing that a person should have.

Education purifies the soul and heals the wounded soul. Educated people can not only perfume their own way of life, but also perfume the lost and lonely hearts of others.

Excerpt from 8 full marks of college entrance examination composition model essay

When I face endless troubles, I want to get my childhood back.

Looking back on my childhood, I played in the farmhouse with my neighbor's children. I am not the king among children, but I am the wise one among those children. I am an advocate and an important participant when playing games. Without participation, the other children are bored. We played and laughed heartily. We don't intrigue, and we don't know how to form gangs. Occasionally, I will soon forget the fight and make up again. In childhood, we had no hatred and no worries. We live naively and enjoy life. In front of parents and elders, we gave them endless family happiness.

The innocence of childhood left us with infinite beautiful memories. In childhood, all our dreams can come true. We can build our own house and play house; We are free and carefree, enjoying the care and love of adults, and that innocence has left us with a permanent memory.

We have grown up. In the face of setbacks and failures, we often feel lost. In several dreams, the shadow of childhood appeared, and the bits and pieces of our happy life seemed to give me the motivation to forget my troubles.

With the passage of time, we have gone from naive childhood and ignorant teenagers to enthusiastic youth step by step. We began to have more ideas and plans to realize our dreams, and began to appear inexplicable rebellion and personality independence. Adults say: the young man is mature! However, we are extremely confused. We seem to have reached a crossroads in our lives. Without guidance, some people will go astray, others will be at a loss, and we need guidance to get out of the maze.

In the days when knowledge is constantly updated, we have learned a lot of new knowledge and new ideas through the Internet and many media. But in real life, we compare more than once, and even have the psychology of keeping up with the joneses.

We hope to find confidence in confusion, gain success and taste life.

In an era full of challenges and competitions, our hearts are under pressure from many aspects. Sometimes we will recall our childhood, hoping to return the innocence of childhood to our inner world, find back the dreamy years of childhood and decompress ourselves.

In this way, our life will become better, we will not be obsessed with money and power, we will not play with power, we will not sink, we will not be obsessed, and we will not intrigue.

At that time, when we are looking for opportunities for success, we will be more childlike and happy, and we will be able to get rid of confusion and get happiness and success.