Traditional Culture Encyclopedia - Traditional stories - I'm Korean. Learn Chinese. Today's homework is about Korean food. See if there are any mistakes. thank you

I'm Korean. Learn Chinese. Today's homework is about Korean food. See if there are any mistakes. thank you

"Almost 2 million" was changed to "Almost 2 million";

The period of the second sentence should be a comma;

The fourth period should be changed to comma;

Change "menu" to "dishes";

Change "good memories" to "good memories"