The senior high school entrance examination is coming, and we need some excellent model essays.

Selected compositions with full marks in the latest senior high school entrance examination (1)

First of all, win by description.

From the perspective of thinking form, there are two main types of articles, one is logical thinking, and the other is image thinking. Articles with logical thinking, such as argumentative essays, prove and emphasize the author's point of view through strict logical relations. Articles of thinking in images include narratives, novels and other literary works, which have an appeal through vivid content. Logical thinking is an advanced form of thinking. It was not until high school that the application of composition was emphasized, and thinking in images was the basic form of thinking. Both narrative writing and novel writing emphasize "vivid image", and whether it is "vivid image" is an important criterion to judge whether an article is good or bad.

How can I write an article vividly? One of the most critical methods is to use the technique of "description".

A high-level description is like a camera reproducing the actual state at that time, which makes people feel like seeing that person, smelling the sound, smelling the taste and being there.

"Description" can be divided into two categories: scenery description and character description. Character description is divided into appearance, language, action, psychology, expression and detail description.

Read the following article and think about it: Can I write? How to write it? After reading the article, think again: What kinds of descriptive techniques are used in this article? What happens if you don't use descriptive skills?

First, the 2007 Shanghai senior high school entrance examination perfect composition

Topic: There is always a memorable day in life, and it is this day that enriches our lives. "This day" may be so extraordinary from early morning to dusk, or it may be a moment that makes "this day" extraordinary. ?

Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "Remember this day".

1, remember this day

"Pa", just walked into the alley, I heard the sound of throwing cups all the way, and my heart tightened and I hurried home. I met my neighbor head-on, and I knew from her eyes that something must have happened to my family again!

When I arrived at the door, I heard the reverberation from the room, followed by my mother's crying. "Oh my God! Hand in hand! " I hurried into the house, only to find that my mother was covered with tears, her hair was unkempt, her coat was tattered, and her father's image was similar, showing that the two sides were evenly matched, but "men don't flick when they have tears."

"I've had enough of this day, divorce! Divorce! " Mom's soprano almost pierced my eardrum. I looked at my mother and then at my father. Mom seems to make a mountain out of a molehill, and dad is still old-fashioned: he takes things too seriously but can't end them, and looks like a warm soup. "Is it not playing mahjong? What happened to playing mahjong? Is it illegal? Do the police want you to take care of it? " Although my mother's education is not high, the quarrel is unambiguous, and the rhetorical question seems to be a barrage. At this time, dad had to listen. I am stupefied, it is for beating hemp pulp again! Mom and dad argued about it more than once. Alas! What do you think our ancestors invented? Why did they invent this thing? I don't know how many families were hurt.

"Dad, mom, you stop arguing. I am hungry, and I have to review my lessons after dinner. " I look for opportunities to change the subject. As soon as my mother heard this, she stopped crying slowly, and I lost no time in handing out tissues. "You wait, I'll cook." Mother dried her tears and prepared to go to the kitchen. I thought to myself, it seems that this trick is quite useful.

"Leave!" My mother was about to call a truce when my father hardened his attitude. A thunderous roar startled me. The muscles on his face are shaking violently and he looks really angry. I quickly dozen circle field: "dad, you have to think clearly: it doesn't matter if you leave, what can I do?" There is less than a month before the senior high school entrance examination. Do me a favor and wait until I finish my exams before getting divorced, okay? "At this time, the room was surprisingly quiet. For a long time, I heard my father sigh heavily. My mother looked at me guiltily, glanced at my father in fear, stood up silently, wiped her tears with the back of her hand, smoothed her messy hair and walked to the kitchen. Dad also silently picked up the broom and began to clean the battlefield. According to past experience, I know that the dawn of peace has finally arrived! I am proud of my excellent peacekeeping mission. After a while, the kitchen smelled of food and the floor was clean. Nothing seems to have happened at home except the messy clothes on both sides.

While eating, I helped my parents with food and said sadly, "I love you, and no one can lose you." I hope this is your last battle. Please remember this day and never forget it. "Mom and dad looked at each other and nodded at me. From their eyes, I believe that "war" will never come again.

Comments: 1, the beginning of the article is fascinating and fascinating. 2. There are many language descriptions in the full text, which vividly shows this family storm.

Step 2 remember this day

A bleak autumn night, outside, a vague figure accompanied by a knock at the door. ...

"Excuse me, can you turn down the volume?" Dad bowed his head and said to his neighbor on the fourth floor. "er ... ok!" Before he finished, his father interrupted him again. "My child is doing his homework. Your voice is ... a little loud. " "bang!" With the sound of closing the door, my father turned around, sighed and frowned lightly. Suddenly, the air around him seems to be trapped, only full of faint sadness and helplessness.

This is an ordinary "landscape", which is familiar to residents of Building 6. Because, almost every day at this time, my father on the fifth floor will come over and ask my neighbors not to make any noise to influence me-a student who "struggles" for the senior high school entrance examination.

But, who knows, there is no reason not to make a sound? Not to mention the buzzing sound from Aunt Zhang's washing machine on the sixth floor, even the rock music played by Xiao Wu on the fourth floor is enough to make me unable to do my homework with peace of mind.

"Well, too influential! Say it again today! " Dad didn't wait for the "movement" to start playing, but wanted to say to his neighbor, "Dad, don't go. Why do people listen to you? " When I heard my father's complaint in the room, I felt like a walnut was suddenly knocked open, and the cool bitterness welled up in my heart. I can't help but rush out and say to him.

"no!" Dad didn't listen to my persuasion at all and rushed out of the house.

I lie prone in front of the window and can't bear to watch this moment: a father who is over half a year old is going to pay dignity for his daughter!

One hand was raised, and just as I was about to "enjoy" the noise for a few minutes, suddenly, the sound disappeared! My father's hand "trying to knock on the door to stop" was instantly stiff. At this moment, Building 6 has returned to the scene of "All is silent".

On this day, my heart was deeply shocked. I can't forget my father's love, but the silence of my neighbors moved me even more. Has the "scenery" disappeared? No, the once "scenery" is gradually sneaking into the night. Now, the silence of that day continues as always, and I keep this day in my heart.

Remember this day, remember that moment, and remember the love of everyone around you. Because this day contains the love of my father, the understanding and concern of my neighbors, and my careful interpretation of the word "love"!

Comment: 1, the theme of this article is love: father's love, neighbor's love, focusing on what my father and neighbors have done for me. Behind the "vague figure" and "knocking at the door" at the beginning of the article is the father's love.

Second, in 2007, Jinan City, Shandong Province, got full marks in the senior high school entrance examination.

Write a composition on the topic of "eternal beauty"

3. Beautiful butterflies

Life is short, but the beauty of life is eternal.

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The shower gradually stopped, so I went out of the stuffy room to get some air. My eyes suddenly lit up, ah! A colorful butterfly! Blue skirt, white ribbon, butterflies flying like fairies. Not far away, it is such a gorgeous flower that presents a different kind of beauty in the washing of rain. Butterflies are flying among the flowers, which disturbs my vision. Suddenly it flew again and landed on the trunk of a big tree next to me. Is it showing off its beauty to me? I stopped to watch.

"poof!" The butterfly was hit by a raindrop and fell into a puddle under the tree. I froze. I don't know if I should hold it. My weak wings flapped feebly in the water. I suddenly found that my breathing was shortness of breath. Gradually, gradually, a miracle appeared. It climbed up to a small flower in a puddle bit by bit, erected its wet wings and trembled slightly in the wind.

My heart is full of joy. The tenacious life finally overcame the bad luck. Suddenly a breeze blew and countless raindrops fell on the trees. The butterfly was unfortunately hit again and fell miserably. My heart aches. There are shallow ripples on the water, and this little life is still struggling. It's alive! I seem to feel the throb of powerful life! Pick it up carefully at once. Trembling wings open and close slightly, and my heart falls with them. Weak butterfly, can you survive?

Another gust of wind blew, the sky cleared up and a rainbow hung in the sky. The brave butterfly tried several times and finally jumped out of my hand and flew to Ran Ran. ...

I stood still and looked at it. Respectable butterfly, for the sake of beauty, break the shackles of silk cocoon, for the sake of beauty, overcome the hardships of wind and rain, isn't it explaining to me the eternal beauty of life?

Comments: 1, the central word: beauty, the beauty of life. Grasp the central word and the theme of the article. 2. The inscription and the ending echo from beginning to end, profoundly pointing out the theme of the article.

Third, in 2007, Qingdao City, Shandong Province, made a perfect composition.

Filial piety is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Xunzi's "On Outline" pointed out: "The proprietors are respected by the nobles, and the elders are filial." "The Doctrine of the Mean" also said: "Filial piety is good at following people's aspirations and telling people things." Filial piety means being kind to parents, serving them wholeheartedly, obeying them, respecting them and caring for them. From this perspective, filial piety is the duty of children and the obligation of younger generations. Please write an article of about 600 words with the topic of "filial piety" and your own topic and style (except poetry and drama). The real school name and person's name shall not appear in the text.

Step 4 present

When I came home from school, my father was lying on the ground knitting straw mats. When he saw me, he immediately stopped his work and looked at me transfixed. The surprise of reunion after such a long separation clearly flashed in his deep eyes. ?

I quickly stepped forward to help him sit down and couldn't wait to report the good news I brought back: "Dad, I won the first place in the midterm exam!" " "Father nodded excitedly, revealing a face of excitement and joy:" ... aye! All right! ……"? " Dad! Tomorrow is your fifty-third birthday. I bought you a cigarette with a scholarship. "I dug out his birthday present from my bag with passion and presented it respectfully. ?

Smoking is my father's greatest hobby in his life. Smoke has a strange magic that can keep him away from fatigue. Every time my father is tired in the field, he takes out a cheap and inferior cigarette from his pocket and lights it leisurely. After working in the field, he smoked a cigarette with a focused and comfortable expression. Finally, his physical strength seems to have completely recovered, so he picked up farm tools and worked harder ...?

At this time, my father stayed and didn't answer. He stood up slowly and left the wooden bench. The expression on his face suddenly became complicated, and his lips began to move violently, but no sound was made. ?

"dad! More than three packs of good cigarettes! " My father just reached out and shook his cigarette. ?

I want to cry at the sight of his blue hands-my mother has long gone. For more than ten years, he has been running the house and the house alone, and he has to provide me with a study. People age quickly. I can't bear to see it. When I received the admission notice from the city's key middle school six months ago, I asked my father to give up his studies and help him. But he flatly refused, so he borrowed from the east and borrowed from the west to gather together 1200 yuan and sent me to the station: "Go and study hard. Everything will be fine after reading the book. After going home to visit relatives on holidays, I will bring my father two packs of good cigarettes, and my father will be satisfied. " When the bus was about to leave, my father rushed up again, struggled to climb the window and told me, "If you need money, just call your neighbor.". Dad has a way! " I nodded tearfully ...?

At this point, I want my father to open the cigarette case immediately, take out one, and focus on lighting it comfortably as usual after being tired. However, I can't. Father just held the cigarette in front of his eyes and stared at it emotionally. He looked at the cigarette and then at me. His eyes were full of tears. For a long time, he put down his cigarette carefully and said calmly, "smoke, I quit." ?

"Dad ..." I threw myself into my father's warm arms and sobbed. ?

"Silly child, why are you crying? You buy cigarettes with a scholarship, which is the best gift you can give your father! " Hearing this, I can't cry anymore. I let my father's rough hand touch my head affectionately, stroking. ...

Comments: The characters are vivid and vivid. Skills: language+action, expression.