How to evaluate the plot of "Do you know if it should be green, fat, red and thin"? What are the slots?

The theme and purpose of "Do you know if it should be green, fat, red and thin" should be to show the social reality at that time through personal experience and achieve the effects of "Dream of Red Mansions", "Golden Family" and "Clouds in Beijing". Unfortunately, neither the original nor the director and screenwriter of TV have achieved this goal. This drama is still dominated by ancient puppets, but it is more terrible than pure puppets. Just a semi-ancient puppet, this play is like this.

What is a puppet? Judging from the service and etiquette lines, the play seems quite serious, but it can't stand careful scrutiny. The lines look antique, but in fact they are quite half written and half white, and there are many flaws in them. First of all, there are obvious mistakes in the simplest address and modesty. For example, how can you say "poor hospitality" and how can the other party say "your little girl"? Secondly, there are many modern network terms in the lines. In previous episodes, the phrase "people who pretend to sleep can't wake up" appeared, while "courtesy is not strange to many people" existed in the Qing Dynasty, but it can't be said in the Song Dynasty. ; Finally, the language of the characters is not personalized, and it sounds like everyone speaks the same.

Of course, the lines are local problems, and the overall problem of the plot is also great. First of all, the rhythm of the plot is too slow. I adjusted the speed to 1.5 times, there was no obstacle at all, and I even needed to fast forward. Secondly, the rhythm control is not good, the heavy scenes are not written enough, and there are too many scenes, which seems to have no sense of ups and downs. On the contrary, there is a straightforward sense of explanation. Although it emphasizes step by step growth, TV series is not a novel, so it is impossible to really explain it clearly. There must be a plot high point.

In terms of characters, the play has new settings in terms of characters and stories. For example, in the past dramas, the tough guy's was the first room, but here was the concubine room. However, in order to set enough suffering for the hostess, it is really bad to write the villain as a bitch. The wife in the main room blows without any ink, and the father is extremely eccentric. I feel that the plot is all driven by villains and mentally retarded people, and the audience can neither see the coolness of the cool drama nor the pain points of the drama.

The design of the male host in the play is also relatively novel. Before that, there were outsiders and children, which was simply a taboo for the male host in idol dramas, while the father of the male host and the father of the female host seemed very orthodox in ancient times. It seems that there are no good men in the drama in the eyes of modern audiences except male No.2. The male actors in the whole play are all blind and mentally retarded, and they have no ability to identify bitches, which is not good-looking. Although according to the aura and appearance of the protagonist when he was a child, we all know that he must be whitewashed in the back, but the problem is that the front is not written well. Moreover, the scene of the house fight after the man and the woman left the outer room is obviously repeated with the scene of the woman's house in front. Therefore, although this drama is a fresh story of Gongdou, it is actually a derivative of Gongdou, and there is nothing new.

Speaking of some small details, many characters were confused in the early stage, but no characters were introduced. Surprisingly, after eight episodes of barrage, the introduction of characters actually started in the ninth episode ... I don't know if the first eight episodes didn't do it or if the producers heard the audience's voice and improved. Unfortunately, it is too late.

Of course, the whole drama also has many advantages. Some plays are more interesting and the details are more in place. For example, the details of the scene in which Fu Sheng first entered the court were well done, which obviously reflected his character. Therefore, the whole drama is above average, and the plot is ok, but there are still many slots.