The "thorns" as the topic of the composition material

In the daily study, work, life, we all inevitably have to come into contact with the composition, composition is the memory of the people stored in the relevant knowledge, experience and ideas expressed in written form of narrative. How to write a thoughtful and literate composition? The following is my compilation of "thorns" as the topic of the composition material, just for reference, I hope to help you.

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"Thorns", a general reference to the mountains and fields of thorny shrubs, a metaphor for difficult and dangerous situations or chaotic situations. From the content of the article, we generally tend to the latter, writing their own in the predicament of how to choose, or how to overcome the ups and downs of the story. If you take this line of thought, the writing should pay attention to the selection of materials, try to avoid, for example, test failure, and then regain confidence, and strive to achieve success after this kind of mundane story. You can change a point of view, such as the main body of the article for a tree, a flower, or a masterpiece of the people, but also the name of Sima Qian, Tao Yuanming and other ancients, the classic story of these classic characters, re-enacted, so as to cross the thorns and succeed in the life of the epiphany.

In addition, the object of our writing is purely on the "thorns" itself, write about the characteristics of the plant itself, of course, purely descriptive certainly can not make the article sublimation of the main idea, we can be in the scenery, borrowed from the natural attributes of the thorns to transition to a variety of life lessons. For example, the thorns are not trees tall, no flowers bright, but has its own unique beauty, it is simple, strong, willing to give and so on, can be used as an incision, to organize the ideas of the article.

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Material 1: Frida? Carlo was born in the southern Mexico City neighborhood of Coyoacan, at the age of six Frieda got polio, resulting in the atrophy of the right leg. 18 years old when she was in a car accident, although she miraculously survived, in addition to falling into the body of the disability, but also lifelong infertility. She has since undergone 33 surgeries, many of which she has been intubated, and Frieda's will and desire to live has kept her alive and recovering. In addition, out of hobby, she began to paint, and many of her paintings were done in her hospital bed. Her strength and persistence made painting a lifelong profession. Later, she successfully organized an exhibition in Mexico, and she became a famous painter both at home and abroad.

Material point of view: this kind of material, tell us: in the face of life's sudden misfortunes, successive blows, should be tenacious. Spirit, optimism and positive attitude to face, in order to make the right choice! Want to live a wonderful life of their own, walking on the road of life, even if it is difficult, but also out of their own piece of heaven and earth!

Material 2: Soon after the birth of the young eagle, the mother eagle began to take it for a short distance, low altitude test flight. The young eagle has to go through hundreds and thousands of such training sessions, otherwise, it will not be able to get food from the mother. On this basis, the mother eagle takes the young eagles to the treetops and cliffs, and then drops them one by one with her wings. Some young eagles become victims of this session because of their unsound basic skills. Those eaglets that are thrown off the cliffs by their mothers and manage to fly back up triumphantly face an even more severe test: the mother breaks most of the bones in their growing wings and then throws them off the cliffs again. It goes without saying that it is the "cruelty" of the mother that builds a strong rainbow of life for her young!

Material point: This is a classic material. From the natural world of small animal stories to enlighten us about the true meaning of life. The road of life, thorns and thistles, there are always some unexpected setbacks, dangers in the unintentional out of the horizontal. The only way to walk on it is to put your life in danger. Choice to retreat, waiting for you will be mediocre life; choice to move forward, waiting for you, despite the tears, and even blood, but there will always be success to you!

Material 3: in the wilderness, thorns and jujube is not monotonous, not boring, because in addition to each other, there are bees and butterflies play, birds rest, and like to call the grasshoppers ...... grasshoppers often thorn bushes to cover, before because of the love of grasshoppers and go to catch catch them when the arm is tied! I've hurt my arm a few times when I went to catch them because I love them. Later on, when I got experienced, I would keep a close eye on them and drive them out of the thorn bushes before I did it. Thorns and jujubes are extremely vigorous, cold and drought resistant, and both have large roots that can grow normally even in the cracks of rocks. When the jujube is ripe, there are sour, sweet, sour with sweet, green, red, green and red, red through white, tasted more, the heart of the self-proportional, only to pick their favorite to eat. In addition to the thorns can be woven basket, thorns of the rhizome can also be used for carving, but also very beautiful.

Material point of view: mention of thorns, we generally think of the strong, struggle, defy the difficulties of such feelings, this article does not fall into this line of thought, but only write "thorns" this plant, do not extend the meaning of the other, because of this, the article instead of a simple and simple beauty. So, we can also write such a prose, the use of subtle observation and real emotion to impress the reader.

Material Exercise

The wind blew through the thorns

It was a fish, an insignificant, but presumptuous fish that tried to swim across the sea.

He is not an ordinary fish, he does not have a great body, and he does not have a high skill, he is just an ordinary fish. He originally lived in the river, life is quite free, but every day fear, always on guard against the fisherman's capture.

Gradually, he began to envision. What would be on the other side of the sea? Is it dilapidated, or is it glorious? He desperately wanted to go to the other side of the sea to see. So, he began to act.

He swam and swam and swam, dodging big fish and holding fast to his dream. He was greeted by a huge wave, and the white powder drowned him, and he kept spitting out a series of small glass bead-like bubbles, releasing the pressure and panic. When he got tired of swimming, he looked up and looked ahead, hoping to see the creek at the other end of the bank, hoping to see the familiar yellow earth of the bank, even if it was just a little bit. But what he can see is just a vast blue, blue penetrating, but also blue dead.

Occasionally a shark or some other overlord appeared, sweeping across the landscape, and the smallness of his body and his desperate running allowed him to escape the encirclement. All he could do was watch as other fish of all shapes and sizes were swept into the shark's mouth by a single wave, which culminated in a long puff from the shark, a sound so thick that it made people tremble.

He could imagine many more difficulties, but he did not shrink from them, and he firmly believed that he could persevere, and persevere until the day when his long-cherished dream was realized. He thought that as long as it was because of faith, anything could be done well, and one day he would be able to cross the infinite sea, and would be able to swim to the other shore.

One day, he saw a huge shadow over his head, and in a flash, a big net came swiftly. He was arrested. But after a while, he was released again. Puzzled, he looked up, and suddenly, several behemoths were thrown down, along with bright red blood that rippled around them. The behemoths sank slowly, occasionally turning upside down, but to no avail. They eventually sank into the deep sea. They were sharks, their fins brutally cut off. Strong as they were, they ended their lives like this. He sighed sardonically, and his heart let out an infinite amount of emotion: the stage of life is played out with all sorts of possibilities. Even so, he thought, he might be one of the lucky few and successfully realize his dream. This is like the Journey to the West, ninety-nine eighty-one difficulties, but ultimately will succeed, because he walked through the long thorny road, life will return him a happy ending.

Another morning, in a haze, he once again looked into the distance, still a blank, but that blue, has emerged vivid.

No problem, sooner or later will arrive. Thinking so, he swam ahead again. He knew that just as the wind would blow through the thorns, he would also sweep through the difficulties and head towards the sea, towards the dream in his heart.

Teacher's Comment

The article is a self-explanatory account of a fish's journey to the sea. The road is full of thorns and thistles: fishermen's roundups, fish bullies, and fishing nets, but the belief in its heart remains steadfast. Only with a dream in your heart can you step over the thorns and reach success. The small author craftsmanship, rigorous structure, novel angle, fresh language, is not a superior work.