A brief comment on the correction of primary school students' compositions

1. The article not only expresses the author's love for his father, but also expresses his thoughts about his father. It has vivid descriptions, especially in words and sentences. Romance in language and style stimulates readers' interest in reading. 2. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality with keen social insight, and with vivid language, they can be said to be profound.

3. Taking ... as a clue, the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

4. This paper has chosen a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

5, such as beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure, can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, this teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

2. Pupils' composition correction comments are short.

1, the article is true and vivid, sincere and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking. 2. Being able to have a reasonable imagination, embody a meaningful philosophy, write fluently and concisely, and give full play to your imagination is a good article. It is elegant, elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the humor of the characters' language, coupled with the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

3. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is smooth and vivid.

4. The material of this article is very novel ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.

5. The main advantages of this paper are as follows:

(1) This paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and completely describe the process of ….

(2) The structure is rigorous and focused.

(3) The language is concise, concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.

3. Pupils' composition correction comments are short.

1, simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is magnificent, which is very instructive to read.

3. The description of experimental phenomena can be pertinent, detailed and comprehensive. The article embodies the interest and knowledge of natural science and is very interesting to read.

This article is a mature narrative work. The whole process of the experiment was shown in accurate and fluent language, which was full of ups and downs and interesting. The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

5. The article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.

4. Pupils' composition correction comments are short.

1, the article is narrated in children's language, natural and simple, like a clear spring. The finish line played the role of finishing touch. 2. On the basis of folklore, the article carries out reasonable imagination and vivid description, deduces wonderful fairy tales, and makes them interesting to read.

3. The language is concise, to the point, to the point, concise and powerful, and full of pen power. A few words can convey the appearance of the characters.

4. The material selection is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, without originality, and it is difficult to deeply reflect the times and authenticity of life.

5. Although the events with certain narrative value are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.

5. Pupils' composition correction comments are short.

1. The central sentence revealed at the end of the article is a clear pen and summary, short and powerful. Through careful observation, I vividly described it in appropriate language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting.

3. A detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements. This is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

4. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.

Music is beautiful, and the language of this article is also beautiful, poetic and dreamy. How beautiful!

6. Pupils' composition correction comments are short.

1, this article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people unforgettable after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply. Your imagination is so strange, bold and rich that the teacher is surprised. Your fairy tales, with magical imagination, can be described as "original". The vivid description makes people feel fresh and interesting. Hat horn is a lovely little fox, and the joys and sorrows you have given it are simply amazing. The teacher applauded for you. I believe you are not far from the writer's dream.

3. It can lead to reasonable imagination and embody meaningful philosophy ... The writing is fluent and concise, which gives full play to one's imagination. This is a good article ... The article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the humor of the characters' language, plus the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

4. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.

Your composition is excellent, which not only describes the appearance of the chicken, but also describes its eating behavior, barking and quarrelling.