Portrait description composition

1. Composition describing portraits 1. Lingling is less than two years old and chubby.

On her red face, there is a pair of watery glasses. Long hair is in the air, and pink hair bands jump on the head, like two flying butterflies.

What is particularly pleasing is her clever little mouth. 2. Mr. Du looks more than 30 years old, with a pair of black wide-brimmed glasses on his serious rectangular face, and two small eyes shining behind the glasses; Two corners of the mouth are always closed, and they don't like to talk at ordinary times.

As far as I can remember, he seems to be wearing only a semi-old blue dress with his sleeves always pulled. Whenever class is over, he puts the book under his arm, puts the remaining half piece of chalk in his pocket, lowers his head, and slowly walks to his office step by step like a footprint.

However, in class, he seems to be a different person. He talks a lot in class and reads the text loudly. Sometimes he is red in the face with excitement. He goes to the platform and waves his arms ... The students' attention is attracted by him. They look at him with wide eyes.

The old man's eyebrows and beard are gray. But the face is still purple and looks radiant.

He is wearing a brand-new blue cotton-padded jacket and trousers and a white towel on his head. The old man squatted on the ground and smoked happily.

4. On the tanned thin face, there are a pair of big double-fold eyes slightly concave; Eyebrows are thin and oblique; Black with yellow hair tied into two short braids with cotton stripes; Clothes are very old; Pin a hole in the right trouser leg; I go barefoot in spring, summer and autumn. Only when I go up the mountain to collect firewood, I wear a pair of shoes for fear of pricking my feet, but I take them off as soon as I get down the mountain. This is a young man in his thirties.

Wearing a military coat and high boots. Tall, square face, very burly.

There is a mole on the chin, and those eyes are shining in the dark, which makes people feel rough and smart. Liu Yun is a clever and naughty boy.

He has a chubby face, a pair of big naughty eyes, and his eyes are flickering. As soon as those two big black ruby eyes turn, the trick comes. On his dark face, whether it is bulging cheeks, thin lips or slightly tilted nose, you feel funny.

7. The old man wears a broken straw hat on his head, and his hair exposed outside the brim is gray. There is a coat that is neither gray nor yellow on the shoulder.

The whole back, dark and shiny, seems to be coated with oil. The following trouser legs rolled over the knees, and the furry calves were covered with countless large and small tendons and bumps, which were connected in series by towering blood vessels.

There are no shoes on my feet, and the old skin on my feet is even a finger thick ... There is a long pipe around my waist, which swings like a pendulum. On New Year's Eve, her son and grandson came to her. Her wrinkles spread out like petals of a blooming chrysanthemum, and every wrinkle was filled with a smile.

One day, her wife was ill, and the beaded wrinkles on her face deepened, and the acne twisted into two locked eyebrows. She looked at his wife's portrait, her lips trembled slightly, and tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles.

9. The daughter looks like her mother, especially her eyes. White-eyed ducks and eggs are clear, and black-eyed chess pieces are black. It is like clear water when it is calm, and like a star when it is shining.

Up and down, head is head, feet are feet. Hair is slippery, clothes are earned.

Attached "How to Write a Good Description of People's Appearance" The description of people's appearance is an important content of people's description. Describing a person's appearance well can often make people vivid and leave a deep impression on readers. Character appearance mainly includes people's appearance, posture, clothing, expression, manner and so on.

The description of people's appearance is also called portrait description, which describes people's appearance and characteristics accurately, vividly and vividly, and reveals people's ideological quality, mental outlook and personality characteristics to readers through appearance description. How can I write a good character appearance? We might as well start from the following three aspects.

First, the description of appearance should be "accurate". Accuracy is to accurately describe the appearance of a character, and the character will be authentic.

People's appearance is often influenced by their status, occupation, age, education, habits, life experience, family environment, physical condition and other factors. People in different occupations often have different appearances.

For example, dancers have thick legs and slender limbs; Weightlifters are often strong; Fishermen, on the other hand, have darker skin and open their toes like cattail fans, because they have been walking on the boat for a long time. There are obvious differences in appearance between people of different ages. Children are innocent and lovely, young people are full of blood, middle-aged people are mature and steady, and old people are deaf and blind.

All these reflect the natural laws of his life. Of course, people's different habits often show different characteristics.

For example, smokers seem to lack front teeth and smell tobacco from time to time; Non-smokers have white teeth. People's upbringing is different, and it can often be seen from the appearance that educated people are sitting and standing; Educated people speak elegantly and clearly; Uneducated people sit and stand unsteadily, and speak rudely and disorganized ... These must be carefully observed and described in accurate language in order to accurately portray the image of the characters.

Second, the description of appearance should be "precise". The essence is to carefully choose the appearance characteristics of the characters, concentrate on pen and ink description, and make the characters accurate and clear.

There is no one who looks exactly the same in the world. According to the needs of performance, we should carefully choose the distinctive features from the appearance of the characters, concentrate on pen and ink description, and omit or brush away the others to make the appearance of the characters more accurate and distinctive. Sometimes, according to the actual situation of the materials at hand, or for the need of some kind of expression, we can put the highlight of appearance description on a certain part of the character.

If you write grandpa's hand, it's hard and cracked. Although ugly, it is a testimony of hard work. Help me knit toys and be smart. Writing in this way will often make the hardworking and clever grandfather jump to the page.

We can often write new ideas by carefully choosing the distinctive appearance of the characters, accurately describing them. Third, the description of appearance should be "deep".

Depth is the description of the character's appearance, reflecting the character's spiritual quality and writing the character's depth. We describe the appearance of the characters.

2. The description of the appearance, posture, clothing and expression of the characters in the portrait description composition is the description of the appearance of the characters. Describing appearance is like painting or taking pictures, which can make readers understand each other. So appearance description is also called portrait description. The role of portrait description is not only to draw the person's external appearance, but more importantly, to convey the spirit in form and reveal the personality characteristics (showing the identity, personality and life experience of the person) through the external characteristics of the person. Successful portrait description is a key to understanding the characters.

Jingjing is small, but she is very likable. Chubby little figure, walking like a heavy little penguin. On her little red face, there are a pair of crescent eyebrows, a vivid beauty blank. There are two big watery eyes hidden under long eyelashes, which often blink and blink, shining with pleasant light. Long hair is in the air, and pink hair bands jump on the head, like two flying butterflies. What is particularly pleasing is her clever little mouth, which is especially sweet, so that adults can serve her voluntarily.

The old man wore a broken straw hat on his head, and his hair exposed outside the brim was gray. There is a coat that is neither gray nor yellow on the shoulder. The whole back, dark and shiny, seems to be coated with oil. The following trouser legs rolled over the knees, and the furry calves were covered with countless large and small tendons and bumps, which were connected in series by towering blood vessels. There are no shoes on my feet, and the old skin on my feet is even a finger thick ... There is a long pipe around my waist, which swings like a pendulum.

3. Portrait Description Composition (1000) (Note 1) Lingling's attention was attracted by him and she looked at him with wide eyes.

The old man's eyebrows and beard are gray. But the face is still purple and looks radiant. He is wearing a brand-new blue cotton-padded jacket and trousers and a white towel on his head. The old man squatted on the ground and smoked happily.

4. On the tanned thin face, there are a pair of big double-fold eyes slightly concave; Eyebrows are thin and oblique; Black with yellow hair tied into two short braids with cotton stripes; Clothes are very old; Pin a hole in the right trouser leg; I go barefoot in spring, summer and autumn. Only when I go up the mountain to collect firewood, I wear a pair of shoes for fear of pricking my feet, but I take them off as soon as I get down the mountain.

This is a young man in his thirties. Wearing a military coat and high boots. Tall, square face, very burly. There is a mole on the chin, and those eyes are shining in the dark, which makes people feel rough and smart.

Liu Yun is a clever and naughty boy. He has a chubby face, a pair of big naughty eyes, and his eyes are flickering. As soon as those two big black ruby eyes turn, the trick comes. On his dark face, whether it is bulging cheeks, thin lips or slightly tilted nose, you feel funny.

7. The old man wears a broken straw hat on his head, and his hair exposed outside the brim is gray. There is a coat that is neither gray nor yellow on the shoulder. The whole back, dark and shiny, seems to be coated with oil. The following trouser legs rolled over the knees, and the furry calves were covered with countless large and small tendons and bumps, which were connected in series by towering blood vessels. There are no shoes on my feet, and the old skin on my feet is even a finger thick ... There is a long pipe around my waist, which swings like a pendulum.

On New Year's Eve, her son and grandson came to her. Her wrinkles spread out like petals of a blooming chrysanthemum, and every wrinkle was filled with a smile.

One day, her wife was ill, and the beaded wrinkles on her face deepened, and the acne twisted into two locked eyebrows.

She looked at his wife's portrait, her lips trembled slightly, and tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles.

9. The daughter looks like her mother, especially her eyes. White-eyed ducks and eggs are clear, and black-eyed chess pieces are black. It is like clear water when it is calm, and like a star when it is shining. Up and down, head is head, feet are feet. Hair is slippery, clothes are earned.

Attached "How to Write a Good Person's Appearance Description"

Character appearance description is an important part of character description, and good character appearance description can often make the characters vivid and leave a deep impression on readers.

Character appearance mainly includes people's appearance, posture, clothing, expression, manner and so on. The description of people's appearance is also called portrait description, which describes people's appearance and characteristics accurately, vividly and vividly, and reveals people's ideological quality, mental outlook and personality characteristics to readers through appearance description.

How can I write a good character appearance? We might as well start from the following three aspects.

First, the description of appearance should be "accurate". Accuracy is to accurately describe the appearance of a character, and the character will be authentic.

People's appearance is often influenced by their status, occupation, age, education, habits, life experience, family environment, physical condition and other factors. People in different occupations often have different appearances. For example, dancers have thick legs and slender limbs; Weightlifters are often strong; Fishermen, on the other hand, have darker skin and open their toes like cattail fans, because they have been walking on the boat for a long time. There are obvious differences in appearance between people of different ages. Children are innocent and lovely, young people are full of blood, middle-aged people are mature and steady, and old people are deaf and blind. All these reflect the natural laws of his life.

Of course, people's different habits often show different characteristics. For example, smokers seem to lack front teeth and smell tobacco from time to time; Non-smokers have white teeth. People's upbringing is different, and it can often be seen from the appearance that educated people are sitting and standing; Educated people speak elegantly and clearly; Uneducated people sit and stand unsteadily, and speak rudely and disorganized ... These must be carefully observed and described in accurate language in order to accurately portray the image of the characters.

For example, my deskmate's name is XXXXX, and she has dark hair, about an inch long. He has light eyebrows under his hair and big eyes under his eyebrows. His lips are slightly upturned and there are some wrinkles on his nose. When he laughed, he stared at those big eyes and smiled without smiling. XXXXX has many advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages are helpfulness and love of physical exercise. Especially running. The disadvantage is that the action is too slow, and sometimes I like to hit people. When XXX is happy, his eyes narrow into a crack. He used to laugh instead of laughing, but now he smiles naturally and sometimes gives me food. Today is the mid-term exam. Of course, Ni Jianwei also has problems he can't do. He will bury himself in writing for a while, and when he encounters a problem that he can't do, he will frown, glance at the smile on his face and hold hands. Sometimes he yawns. He's angry again. At the moment, his big smiling eyes emit two cold lights, aggressive, his teeth creak and his nose is panting like lack of oxygen. XXX also likes to meddle. I haven't bought "100 moved the father of middle school students" until now, so he will come to talk about me. It's really annoying But he is very generous, whenever I have.

5. The paragraph describing the appearance of the character has a melon head. When he is angry, his face is long and looks like a horse. When he faces you alone, he always puts on an understanding and loving look, and at the same time keeps shaking his head, looking from a distance, like a floating lantern. Do you know his eyes? It's big, dark gray and deep, and it looks sick on that horse's face. When he speaks, he likes to make eyes at everyone. Be careful not to let it hit you, it will make you stunned. His arms and legs are as thin as bamboo poles, and his clothes hang on him like sheets, which makes him erratic and mysterious. This determines that when we play all horror dramas, he will wear a wig to play the female ghost, and there is a pair of watery glasses on her chubby, red face. The pigtails are upturned, and the pink hair bands bounce on her head, like two flying butterflies. What is particularly pleasing is her clever mouth. Miss Du seems to be in her thirties. Her serious rectangular face is wearing a pair of black wide-brimmed glasses, and her two small eyes are shining behind the glasses. The corners of the mouth are always closed, and I don't like to talk at ordinary times. As far as I can remember, he seems to be wearing only a blue dress that is half new and half old, and his sleeves are always pulled. Whenever class is over, he puts the book under his arm, puts the remaining half piece of chalk in his pocket, lowers his head and walks slowly and step by step to his office. However, in class, he seems to be a different person. He talks a lot in class and reads the text loudly. Sometimes he blushes with excitement. He strode to the front of the platform, waving his arms ... the students' attention was attracted by him. The old man's eyebrows and beard have turned gray, but his face is still purple and he looks full of energy. He is wearing a brand-new blue cotton-padded jacket and trousers. Eyebrows are thin and oblique; Black with yellow hair tied into two short braids with cotton stripes; Clothes are very old; Pin a hole in the right trouser leg; I go barefoot in spring, summer and autumn. I only wear a pair of shoes when I go up the mountain to collect firewood, but I take them off as soon as I get down the mountain. This is a young man in his thirties. He was wearing a military coat and high boots. He is tall with a square face. He has a mole on his chin, and his eyes are shining in the dark, which makes people feel rough and smart. 6. He has a pair of naughty big eyes, and his eyes are flickering. As long as those two big black gem eyes turn, something will happen. On his dark face, whether it's bulging cheeks, thin lips or slightly tilted nose, you feel funny. 7. The old man is wearing a broken straw hat, and the hair exposed outside the brim is gray. It is black, bright and shiny, as if it were coated with oil. The lower trouser legs are rolled over the knees, and the hairy calves are covered with countless tendons and bumps, which are connected in series by high-rise blood vessels. There are no shoes on the feet, and the old skin on the skirting board is afraid to be one finger thick ... There is a tobacco bag on the waist, strung on the * *, swinging like a pendulum. 8. Like blooming chrysanthemum petals, every wrinkle is filled with a smile. One day, her wife was ill, and the beaded wrinkles deepened, and a knot in one's heart twisted into two eyebrows and locked together. She looked at his wife's portrait, her lips trembled slightly, and tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles. 9. Her daughter looks like her mother, especially her eyes. White duck eggs are clear and black. Description is description, and writing is imitation. Description is a concrete description of people or scenery in vivid language. This is a common expression in general narration and literary writing. Only through description can an article be vivid, vivid, vivid and vivid. Appearance description, also known as portrait description, describes the appearance characteristics of a character (including his appearance, clothes, facial expressions, body shape, posture, etc.). ), so as to reveal the character's ideological character, express the author's love and hate, and deepen the reader's impression of the character. To write a good character's appearance, we should pay attention to the following points: description skills (1), careful observation, grasping distinctive aspects and highlighting characteristics. (2) Write down the five senses of the characters. (3) Pay attention to the figure and clothes of the characters, and reflect their personalities. (4) Distinguish between gender and age, and use words accurately. (5) Pay attention to life experience and conform to the identity of the characters. (6) Pay attention to the actions you are used to. (7) express emotions and change expressions. (8) pay attention to the key points, there is no first, and the description should be orderly. When describing, you should write in a certain order, either from top to bottom or from bottom to top. If you write eyes, then hair, then mouth, then eyebrows, then nose-no matter how well written, this description gives people the feeling of confusion. Second, harmony. This requires that the written appearance conforms to the identity, age, gender, country and occupation of the characters. It says: Clear eyes are shining. When I look at you, there are thousands of emotions. It can be said that this look is beautiful, but it is not appropriate to write a little girl like this. Third, study the character. For example, in the 90-year college entrance examination, we should first carefully study the materials and analyze the personality characteristics of the characters: the first one is active and willful, and the question is simple and one-sided; The second kind of person is quiet, knows the rules and can see the problem comprehensively. He analyzed the characters' personality characteristics and showed them when describing their appearance. Fourth, he grasped the key points and characteristics.

6. Ask for an essay describing the portrait of a person. As we all know, portrait description refers to the description of the voice, appearance, clothing and posture of the characters. The emotions, life experiences, social status and personality characteristics of characters are often revealed in portraits. Proper portrait description is helpful to portray the characters.

The following are some effective methods that I have summarized from my experience for your reference.

First of all, we should choose the portrait characteristics that can best highlight the personality of the characters to describe.

Portrait is to express the character, reveal the spiritual world and enhance the artistic charm. Good portrait description is not much, but in "essence", it is to show the distinctive personality characteristics of the characters through the most concise words. In retrospect, friends who must have read My Teacher by the famous writer Wei Wei will still have a deep impression on my teacher, Mr. Cai. Her beauty should be unforgettable. There are not many languages, only one sentence "There is a mole the size of Yu Qian in the right corner of the mouth" and a beauty mole is enough to write.

Mr Cai's beauty left a deep and beautiful impression on us.

If you want to take multiple portraits of the same person, you should not only highlight the personality you want to show each time, but also follow the * * * relationship between them. For example, Kong Yiji written by Lu Xun is familiar to everyone. In "Kong Yiji" (the fifth volume of Chinese in Soviet Education Edition), it is written that "only Kong Yiji is standing drinking and wearing a gown." Kong Yiji's unique identity and social status can be summarized in one sentence. He is "black and white with some scars between wrinkles", which shows that he is poor, malnourished and often beaten. "Although I am wearing a robe, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it has not been replenished for more than ten years, and it has not been washed. " It can be seen that he is lazy by nature, but he insists on putting on a poor shelf and wearing a shabby gown. Lu Xun's portrayal of Kong Yiji can be said to be superb, which not only highlights Kong Yiji's personality, but also shows Kong Yiji's * * * nature, thus portraying Kong Yiji, a typical image of a lower-level intellectual in the late Qing Dynasty who was devastated by the imperial examination system.

You should pay attention to a certain order when describing the same person many times. Tang Tao's portrait of Lu Xun in One Side is an excellent example. This paper describes Lu Xun's portrait three times, not only vividly, but also in a reasonable order, from far and near, from coarse to fine, from fine to coarse, from whole to part, so that the characters are gradually enriched with my observation and feelings. In the three descriptions, the author grasped the most important features of the characters' appearance from beginning to end and described them, highlighting his lofty quality and tenacious spirit of devoting his life to the revolutionary cause.

Second, use exact metaphors and appropriate exaggeration to describe portraits.

It will be more vivid to write portraits like this. For example, Wei Wei wrote that Ma Yuxiang "has a black and red face, standing there high, as simple and lovely as the red sorghum in Akita" in "Who is the cutest person", and compared Ma Yuxiang to "a red sorghum in Akita" with an exact metaphor, vividly writing Ma Yuxiang-a person from the north.

Another example is that Lu Xun wrote in "Gao Old Master Q" that the walking posture with high old bars and high shoulders is "like a drill brought by a carpenter"; In Hometown, the description of tofu beauty is "a woman in her fifties standing in front of me with prominent cheekbones and thin lips, her hands in her moustache, her feet open, and no skirt, just like a thin-footed compass in a drawing instrument." Zhao Shuli wrote in Marriage of Little Black Boys that the third fairy "although she is 45 years old, she prefers to be an old lady. Her little shoes need embroidery, her trouser legs need wrapping, and the hair on the top door is covered with a black handkerchief. Unfortunately, the official powder has not smoothed the wrinkles on her face, which looks like frost on donkey dung eggs. " The metaphors used in the above examples are very accurate, so this kind of portrait description can clearly express the character, but it is not easy to use this technique. It requires the author to have a deep understanding of the character, a careful observation of life, a clear understanding of the relationship between the vehicle and the ontology, and then use accurate metaphors and appropriate exaggeration to make the portrait of the character lifelike. Otherwise, it can only be a generalized metaphor. If you can't write different portraits of different characters, you can't show their personalities.

Third, use nicknames to summarize the mental outlook and portrait characteristics of characters.

Mr. Lu Xun often uses this method to write minor characters in novels. For example, Lao Gong with red nose is an alcoholic, Xue Shuang is a dude with empty heart, and Aunt with red eyes is a greedy and cruel jailer. Another example is "triangular face", "goatee", "grizzled beard", "long beard" and "hunchback five young masters", all of which use nicknames to summarize the characteristics of portraits. We can also use this method to achieve good results. For example, if you write about a very obese classmate, you can kindly say "Little Fatty" or something like that. I remember once, I asked my students to write an article entitled "I remembered him (her) at a glance". Everyone uses portraits when writing about him (her), but after reading it, they rarely leave a deep impression because there is no nickname for their characteristics. I revised one of the articles, changed "a child" to "a little one" and nicknamed him "Amy". As a result, everyone left a deep impression after reading it!

The above talked about some methods of portrait description. No matter what method, we should serve to truly reflect life and shape typical characters. Therefore, if you want to write a good portrait, you should first start from life, and the author himself should have a careful observation and profound understanding of the object he wants to describe.